This was less of a scene and more of an add-on to an existing one. I had created it because I was concerned that the basis for Kalynn and Layne’s relationship was too much into the negative. They needed a scene where they were¬†having fun.

When I reached the edit stage, and I needed to cut back on a ballooning word count, I decided to let this one go because it was not advancing the plot. I kind of regret that I had to do it. So, I’m willing to say that this was an event that happened within the context of the story, but wasn’t mentioned in the book.

DS Car Wash V4


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